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What is your favourite food?
Chocolate
Chips
Fruit
Vegetables
Ice Cream
None of the above
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What is your favourite book?
Mysterious Benedict Society
Tom Gates
Gangsta Granny
Counting By 7s
The fault In Our Stars
Wonder
Divergent
Me Stink
A Whole Nother Story
The Hunger Games
None of the above
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Mrs. Peterson (Team 100WC)
May 3, 2014 at 5:47 pm (10 years ago)Olivia,
This cupboard was a gold mine for your desperate character. Your writing describes the situation well, from rags to riches. Well done!
Mrs. Peterson
TX, USA
jasminel5a
May 6, 2014 at 10:28 am (10 years ago)Great job Olivia. It is just what Mrs. Peterson said, from rags to riches. You are a amazing writer and I cant wait to here and read another one of your stories.
Caitlin
May 23, 2014 at 3:40 am (10 years ago)Whoa!
mirandar6
August 23, 2014 at 8:52 am (10 years ago)This is a brilliant piece of writing Olivia! I agree with Jasi and Mrs.Peterson rags to riches! Describing how the bench was dusty and crept up to the cupboard could grab anyones attention. I think next time you can use lots of powerful adjectives and maybe use a simile or metaphor! 🙂